Mary Lim

Wednesday, April 02, 2014

t2: 3 iterations of 1


Critique:
too busy! maybe get rid of the big letters?
the white box is interesting but integrate it better
get rid of the text box on the lower right
incorporate vanderslice in a more interesting way (looks a bit awkward placed on the lower left)
work with the "deborah sussman"

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