mary!the direction you are headed in is really intriguing. the sound seems like an accurate fit for the style. something that might be a beneficial exploration would be adding a little texture to the white bars. or a fade into the solid color. they seem a bit rigid but that might also fit into the rest of your video, i'm not sure though. i am excited to see what the final outcome is.
Hey Mary!!Just creeping on your vid.From what I see you are taking a really abstract view of her poems which shall be interesting to see how you progress. I wonder if you may be doing literal sounds and making motion from that, what if you had a mixture of beautiful music and then when your video "glitches" (taking from your tests) it would have the sound glitch to static/white noise. Keep working it!Lurv,Patty
I like the sound you have chosen so far, It will make your video really interesting. Maybe incorporate the sound by fading in at the beginning.