Mary Lim

Monday, November 17, 2014

narrative: union station pre-final

The video needs refinement; there are times when the yellow circle (indicating the user) sporadically appears on the screen, and timing needs to be finessed. Overall, this is the general look of the video. We also want to possibly add music in the background.



Critique:
-make the location more clear
-make categorical selection clear, without the Jarvis Hunt photograph in either the Timeline view or Categorical view
-fix the user movement with the glithces
-fix the menu icon with just the lines
-add music to establish atmosphere of video
-bring back to the home screen at the end
-for the voice, make longer pauses, seemed a bit fast

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