Mary Lim

Friday, October 30, 2015

ds: working crit




Feedback from crit:
-images of meat + object still looks unrefined, needs finessing
-the meat collages still seems like talking about diet (commentary on eating meat)
-maybe showing the gory aspects of meat (not as a shape, but as a texture)
-the imagery for the angel-like symbol direction is strong, but reconsider the concept for it



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