t2: 3 iterations of the final

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critique:

Poster 1: first one with large DS looks a bit cliche, it's been done before

-the two letters are too heavy and the image in the middle is centered and boring!

-but the dimensionality of the letters is interesting and engages the viewer

-treatment of the smaller block of text needs attention - break it up and add hierarchy

2: the foreground/background dynamic is interesting, however, the treatment of type is conventional and is not pushed enough

3: interesting image, but the poster needs some cleaning up

-explore with composition and hierarchy

-white text looks best

-when the letters are above the cards, should be in all caps 

-need better, more innovative way to incorporate vanderslice

-the flower shapes look excess decoration

-the way the text interacts with the O in "Deborah" looks interesting - do more of that

-should i get rid of the marks in the cards and remake them?